Great to see another chapter and that Ianto got to see Lisa And she's pregnant :0
Just a little thing that bugged me though, is that Llandudno is an end of the line station with no stops after it so he couldn't leave the pregnant woman on the train because everyone gets off there, also the station has no barriers.
Apart from that, this is a fantastic story (and I get a little excited when people writer stories around where I live) so it was great seeing another chapter up.
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Date: 2009-12-19 12:59 pm (UTC)And she's pregnant :0
Just a little thing that bugged me though, is that Llandudno is an end of the line station with no stops after it so he couldn't leave the pregnant woman on the train because everyone gets off there, also the station has no barriers.
Apart from that, this is a fantastic story (and I get a little excited when people writer stories around where I live) so it was great seeing another chapter up.